Yesterday I completed the revisions on my desert story. But not really. I worked through it from first page to last over a week or so making some fundamental changes, but I got better at it as I went. Which means I need to start again at the beginning to make sure my changes are even throughout. When I reread the first chapter, it still wasn’t doing what I wanted so today I’ll work on a new first chapter. One of these days I’ll have to call it done and abandon further efforts, but I can’t quit yet.