Once I reinstated the original title in the nonfiction science book I’m working on, it did require another complete rewrite of the story. I knew this was going to happen. No one even saw the second version except Sandy, who liked it.
The third telling is rolling along fairly quickly because this time I can use some of the existing text. I like this one best of all. Maybe this time I have finally figured out how this story wants to be told. We’ll soon find out.