A new twist

Hi everyone,

I met poet Joy Acey Frelinger in 2011 when she attended my Highlights Foundation poetry workshop near Honesdale, Pennsylvania. Joy, Jeanne Poland, Ken Slesarik, and Cory Corrado were in the same group and I love it that we’ve all stayed in regular contact over these last eight years. That’s Ken and Joy (in red) in the picture.

Yesterday Joy sent me a note about my contribution to Jane Yolen’s new form, which she has dubbed the Tendrillon. Here’s Joy’s note/suggestion.

“I like your reply poem to Jane’s challenge BUT your ending couplet didn’t make much sense to me. I’d like to suggest for the last line:
I’ll drink martinis, very dry.”

And here’s my response.

“Thanks for the suggested revision. I meant my tongue in cheek ending to smack of irony: after over imbibing on wine for so long, my speaker decides to turn to vodka until he gets all that vine out of his system. Your suggestion changes my meaning but is a clearer solution. I’ll mention this on my blog.”

Sometimes when a writer dashes off a line to reflect his meaning, the result isn’t as clear to his reader as it seems in his mind because he knows what he means to convey and the reader has to be told. This may be a good example of it. The floor is open if you care to add your own thoughts to this example or perhaps to speak in general on the subject of clarity of expression. Thanks, Joy, for creating the teaching/learning moment.

My August Word of the Month poem

Hi everyone,
smallDavidHarrisonPosterized
Thanks again to Jeanne Poland for providing OOMPH for this month’s word challenge. Being a musical man of limited vocabulary who tends to repeat himself, here’s mine.

OOMPH

oomph
oomph
oomph dooby oomph
oomph dooby oomph dooby oomph oomph oomph

boomph
boomph
boomph dooby boomph
boomph dooby boomph dooby boomph boomph boomph

oomph oomph oomph
boomph boomph boomph
oomph dooby boomph dooby oomph oomph oomph

boomh boomph boomph
oomph oomph oomph
boomph dooby oomph dooby boomph boomph boomph

oomph dooby dooby dooby

boomph dooby dooby dooby

boomph dooby boomph dooby boomph dooby boomph dooby
boomph dooby boomph dooby boomph dooby
oomph!

On the lookout for summer bugs

Hi everyone,

Next on our summer topic suggestions is this one from Jeanne Poland, who sent this entertaining challenge.

“Today a house fly sat on my deck rail and said hello. Jeanne PolandPlease entertain us with some summer bugs. I want kindergarten science on your blog. I’m sure you wrote the poems already.”

Jeanne, here are two I may have posted before. The first is from the book called bugs, poems about creeping things. The second appeared in The Book of Giant Stories. I have many bug poems but kindergarten children might like these. I’ll look for others but in the meantime the floor is open for others to post their own bug poems, including the clever Jeanne herself.

Centipede
David L. Harrison

Never kiss
The centipede,
Pick him up
Or hug him.

The centipede is
Humorless;
All you’ll do is
Bug him.

In his youth,
The centipede
Never learned
To play,

Never learned to
Hug
Or kiss.
Now he’s
Odd
That way

So never kiss
The centipede.
I say
Not once
But twice,

The centipede’s
A waste of time.
He simply
Isn’t
Nice.

The Gnat
David L. Harrison

A careless giant once sat
On top of a very small gnat.
The gnat looked around
And said with a frown,
“That giant has ruined my hat!”

Jeanne Poland event in January

Honesdale, David and Jeanne

Hi everyone,

Our friend Jeanne Poland is having quite an event on January 14. On that day from 2:00 p.m. to 4:00 p.m. a gallery party at The Kaaterskill Gallery at Columbia Greene Community College in Hudson, New York will celebrate Jeanne’s art and writings. The exhibit will be up throughout the month of January.

If you live in the area, plan to be traveling there, or want to learn more about the event, here’s more information.

image001

image004

Update from Jeanne Poland

BULLETIN: Please check my video on Facebook. “Double double, toil and trouble.” I was going to wait until Halloween but instant gratification got in the way. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=11tTOTPZtE0&feature=youtu.be

Hi everyone,

I asked for updates on writing experiences from anyone who has attended previous poetry workshops. One of the original SWAP 8+1 members, Jeanne Poland, was the first to respond. I am not surprised. Jeanne is always prompt and I relied on her to keep me on schedule at the workshops she attended. She is a former nun, retired teacher, gifted artist, and dedicated poet. Here are her own words. Thanks Jeanne!
Honesdale, David and Jeanne
1 David introduced me to a blog on WordPress, and to daily posting.
I was able to purchase media space and post high-res photos, films, links and marvelous graphics which satisfy my appetite
for illustrations.

2 The replies and comments on various poetry blogs enrich my days immeasurably.

3 Highlights Foundation is my new Writing, Illustrating and Publishing Academy.
The artists are a dignified social circle too.

4 Blurb, an independent author/publishing firm, has guided me in the publication of 13 books.
You can see previews of them for free at:
http://www.blurb.com/search/site_search?search=Jeanne+Poland%27s+Books

5 Working on-line has saved me much travel time, and linked me to the global world of art.

6 I continue to be stimulated by the networking with “live poets in live time” and the art shows held at the galleries here in NY.

7 Finally, my days are sprinkled with the joys of the 3 and 5 year old grand children, who also love to rhyme and initiate great art:
http://thevibrantchanneledcreator.wordpress.com/2014/08/04/dancing-with-scarves/

Sincerely,
Jeanne Poland