Hi everyone,
True to his word, J. Patrick Lewis is back with his latest poetry challenge. According to Pat, this is not a new form but it’s an unusual one. Here’s what our U.S. Children’s Poet Laureate has to say:
A “tailgater” is a couplet, a verse form (not original with me) that begins with the first line of a well-known poem, and follows with the poet’s own nonsensical second line in the same meter. Think of shutting the back gate of a pickup truck. Tailgaters have also been called “deflated couplets.”]
‘Twas the night before Christmas, when all through the house
Came the screaming of Santa Claus—“Eek, there’s a mouse!”
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James James Morrison Morrison Weatherby George Dupree
Was stopped by TSA at LAX for false ID.
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They went to sea in a sieve, they did
(Also known as a colander, kid.)
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Poor old lady, she swallowed a fly,
Breaststroking in her shoo fly pie.
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Tell me, O Octopus, I begs,
Is those things arms, or octopegs?
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O my aged Uncle Arly
Twiced removed was Jacob Marley.
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I never saw a Purple Cow
but grape milk is delicious. Wow!
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One if by land, and two if by sea,
Three if by air, and four? Beats me.
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Whose woods these are I think I know.
Horrors!—it’s Edgar Allan Poe.
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To see the world in a grain of sand
Means you’re in never-never land.
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I must go down to the seas again, to the lonely sea and the sky.
If the tide’s gone out there may be a few dead mackerel to fry.
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“You are old, Father William,” the young man cried.
“He’s only a pup!” Grandpa William replied.
[Note: The first line above is from Robert Southey’s “The Old Man’s Comforts and How He Gained Them.”
The poem is commonly attributed to Lewis Carroll, but Carroll’s poem is a parody of Southey’s poem, which
is now long forgotten. Carroll’s parody begins: “You are old, Father William, the young man said.”]
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From adult poems:
When I have fears that I may cease to be,
Whatever made me think sobriety?
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Jenny kissed me when we met
Drooling like a bachelorette.
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Yes, I remember Adlestrop—
Pop. 13 4. (A cattle stop.)
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If we must die—let it not be like hogs
Listening to right-wing mano-monologues.
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A sweet disorder in the dress
Is evidence that she said yes.
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I saw Eternity the other night.
Took Exit 49—Detroit. Turned right.
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The Assyrian came down like the wolf on the fold—
That animal! Soon apprehended, I’m told.
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The woods decay, the woods decay and fall.
Repeat myself? Re-up my Seconal.
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It’s no go the merrygoround, it’s no go the rickshaw,
All I want is a pit bull and suspension of the leash law.
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Stop all the clocks, cut off the telephone,
Turn on the gas, I’m out of methadone.
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Do you remember an inn, Miranda?
Your iPhone app? Try MEMORANDA.
Thanks, Pat. I’m afraid you’re doing it to us again. I’ll leave this up for a couple of days or so to make sure we give everyone a chance to join the fun.
For more about Pat, here’s a place to start: http://www.jpatricklewis.com
Okay, I’ll go first.
I think that I shall never see
A dog without a single flea.
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Hey diddle diddle the cat and the fiddle
Got married and now she is thick in the middle.
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Hickory dickory dock,
Hums but will not tock.
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“I must go down to the sea again,”
The salmon said to the hatchery men.
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Once upon a midnight dreary —
But once is quite enough, my dearie!
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Haha. Love these, David!
I’ll give it a try.
Whose woods these are I think I know,
Which is why I think I better go.
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Shall I compare the to a summer’s day?
All I can say is you’re hotter than May.
Hotter than May. Ha!
Thanks, Liz. Betcha can’t stop with two. (:>
You are so right. These tailgaters are worse than potato chips.
Ha! Very good, Liz! I think I’ve been in those woods before 🙂
I must go down to the sea again, to the lonely sea and the sky,
To swivel head and fantasize of bikinis twitching by.
The gingham dog and the calico cat
Sued their maker for looking like that.
One upon a midnight dreary
I slept next to my old dearie.
You are old Father William the young man said.
There are coals in your belly and snow on your head.
Trot trot to Boston, trot trot to Lee,
Off to dump me some Patriot tea.
Beautiful dreamer, wake unto me,
Your snoring is driving me out of my tree.
Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall.
Scrambled eggsactly in his awful fall.
There was an old woman who lived in a shoe,
She’d so many corns, only sandals would do.
Am stopping now.
xxxJane
xxxback and thanks!
In Xanadu did Kubla Khan
Boogie down with spandex on.
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Rose is a rose is a rose is a rose
But daisy’s just a daisy, I ‘spose.
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A narrow fellow in the grass
seduced a naive, nubile lass
[I had another one for this, but I’m keeping it clean…]
Love ’em. Smiling at what might have been.
You left us to imagine, but I think you’ve pointed us in the certain direction…
I don’t think I’ve ever seen spandex used in a poem.
love the poem why not send one or two to
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Rub-a-dub-dub, three men in a tub,
None could swim, glub glub glub.
Twinkle, twinkle, little star
I won’t leave ’til I’ve made par.
The Owl and the Pussycat went to sea
The tide returned them immediately.
The gingham dog and the calico cat
Would have been friends, except for their spat.
Two roads diverged in a yellow wood
I couldn’t decide, so there I stood.
Thank you, Cindy,
And on we go!
The road was a ribbon of moonlight over the purple moor,
but somehow, led by his GPS, he was lost in Kuala Lumpur.
Deborah, I think I bought the same brand.
I will arise and go now and go to Innisfree
Where the shopping costs no money for I’ve won a “Designer Spree!”
Two roads diverged in a yellow wood
So I mowed the grass right where I stood
Nature’s first green is gold
Screeched the parrot in the hold
Scared to enter your league but giving it the old elementary try. Hi David from Janet at Tim Rasinski’s poetry pre-conf in Orlando. Hi Pat and Renee.
Greetings, Janet! I’m so glad that you decided to take the plunge. These poetry challenges are always meant to be fun so there is no need to worry about a thing. I hope you’ll come back soon and often.
David
Jack be nimble, Jack be quick
Jump before you light the wick.
There was a crooked man and he walked a crooked mile,
“M-must’ve been the bourbon,” he stammered with a smile.
Hee!!
Hi Penny,
A pair of good ones. Thanks!
Funny.
You’re funny, Penny!
Water, water, everywhere and all the boards did shrink
I shouldn’t have poured that bacon grease in the kitchen sink.
I think that I shall never see.
My spectacles? Absentee.
Ha! My M.O.W. will relate, Renee. We spend a lot of time in the search.
Love these, Renee!
Had we but world enough, and time,
Maybe—just maybe—I’d learn how to rhyme.
Drink to me only with thine eyes—
’cause I’ll throw up if you bare those thighs.
She walks in beauty, like the night—
Methinks her undies are too tight.
Good morning, Julie,
Thanks for joining the party. What fun!
HAHA!
Jack be nimble, Jack be quick
Shake your booty on a pogo stick.
Twas brillig, and the slithy toves
Did rock their nimbles at the rave.
Georgie Porgie, pudding and pie,
Couldn’t get a date in junior high.
What are little girls made of?
Sugar and spice and no birth control device.
Little Boy Blue, stop blowing your horn,
The traffic’s atrocious, our nerves are all worn.
Five little monkeys jumping on the bed;
Turned on their ipads, watched cats instead.
Ah, another victim of Pat’s addictive challenge. Thanks, Buffy! I get a terrific picture with your version of Little Boy Blue.
I think you were brave to take on Jabberwocky and you did it so well.
By the shore of Gitchie Gumee
By the shining big sea water
Each line 8 beats, pounding, drumming,
Henry needs no stinking rhyming.
Deborah, you’ve captured it. Henry worked way too hard!
A hippo sandwich is easy to make
But I’d much rather eat a rib-eye steak.
Hi Karen,
Thanks! Aren’t these fun?
Hi David: Yes, they certainly are!
Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall
Mother Goose gave him time-out for snitching her shawl
Have a great one!
Grow old along with me!
More lovely we’ll both be.
Mary, Mary, quite contrary
Cure what ails thee, have some sherry!
’tis better to have loved and lost.
Art thou prepared —- to bear the cost?
Humpty Dumpty sat on the wall –
Oblivious to his impending downfall.
And here’s Cory! Thank you for your fun contributions. I hope poor Mary heeds your advice.
The farmer in the dell, the farmer in the dell,
I tried to make this sillier but couldn’t, oh well.
These are such fun, David! A field day for the sillies …
The farmer in the dell, the farmer in the dell,
Once fell in his well, but never did tell.
Twinkle, twinkle, little star
I wish upon thee for a brand new car.
Oh, where have you been, Lord Randal, my son?
Your supper’s gone cold and your bed’s not undone?
Once upon a midnight dreary-
Spinning dreams so light and cheery.
Cory, light and cheery? Poe would spin in his grave!
I wonder what Poe would make of this, David … there’s no taming the no-sense-sillies! Keep smiling!
Once upon a midnight dreary-
Spinning dreams so light and cheery
Lullabyed by Scott McCreery …
Okay, these are such fun. Here’s one I finally ‘found’ in my head! Thanks both of you for doing!
Blessings on thee little man
Barefoot boy with cheeks of tan
To the Payless you must go
Covering your little toes.
Ha! You hit it on the mark, Linda.
Hickety pickety, my black hen
Pecks at legs of gentlemen.
Hey diddle diddle, the cat and the fiddle.
He would have played longer, but he had to piddle.
There was an old woman who lived in a shoe.
A boot would have been better when her children grew.
Such fun! Thanks David and Pat!
There was an old woman who lived in a boot . . . hmmm. Might work.
Snicker, snicker! You’re funny, too, Iza!!! I think we have similar senses of humor!
Sighed Mayzie, a lazy bird hatching an egg,
“Please bring me some breakfast, I hate to beg.”
The whiskey on your breath
caused Mom to have a tizzy
she poured one for herself
their drinking was too easy. (Yes, I know this is a quatrain, but you know my theory about quatrains being broken couplets.)
I’m no body! Who are you?
Do we belong in the zoo?
David, these are delightful fun. Thank you.
Hey Joy, thanks for pitching in. They are definitely habit forming!
David
ON SECOND THOUGHT
Whose woods these are? I think I know,
No I don’t it’s time to go.
I’M BEGGING YOU
Hey Little Diddle Diddle
Please take a piddle!
SUCH IS LIFE
Between what I see and what say
No one pays attention anyway.
WEEKDAY SHOPPING
Once upon a midnight dreary
I saw my wife looking cheery.
Hi Charles!
Thanks for coming by today. It’s always a pleasure to read your contributions.
Once upon a midnight dreary
Glimpsed a raven drenched and weary …
Wow, Cory, you out-wearied Poe!
Twas brillig and the slithy toves
made off with my designer clothes.
Hey Italy! How are things in your woods? I guess now you’ll have to go shopping for more of those fab duds!
The woods are lovely, dark, and deep over here, kind sir! I’m popping in on my writing breaks. Pushing through to a deadline. Gah!
Keep on shoveling. There’s a bottom to the box somewhere.
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